Absent For A Bit ....

I am away for a little while working on a few or more episodes for The Adventures of My Space Alien Alter Ego story ... will return (to Earth) soon!

Notice: Blogger has screwed up and lost a bunch of photos out of my blog! They are replaced with a gray silhouette of a human head. I will eventually get them replaced with the correct photo, it may take a while to find and fix everything. So some of my stories don't make much sense without their photos, sorry for the inconvenience.

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2009-12-10

The Only Thing



The only thing that I can do,

when I think about you,

is to cry.



This is a poem piece with a rhyming structure 
using a modified tapering haiku 
as a unit segment


Syllable Length:
8 - 6 - 3


Rhyme Structure:
--A,--A,-AB


which I want to extend in a serial 
manner, overall 
spiral 
structure:


--A,--A,-AB
--B,--B,-BC
--C,--C,-Cx
.
.
--z,--z,-zA


that links the final A 
to the initial A


Another structure piece is the 
beginning sound of the 
3rd word of the 
1st and 2nd part of the 
unit:


THINg
THINk


as well as
 the duplication of the 
pronoun
'I'



POETRY LINK: the next poem in my blog ...






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These are pieces that I have generated mainly using computer art tools. Enjoy !

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I am also in the process of linking my poetry blog entries together. This project is only partially finished. A "Poetry LINK" at the bottom of the blog entry points to the next older piece of poetry.


First poem in the series of linked poems ....

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