The only thing that I can do,
when I think about you,
is to cry.
This is a poem piece with a rhyming structure
using a modified tapering haiku
as a unit segment
Syllable Length:
8 - 6 - 3
Rhyme Structure:
--A,--A,-AB
which I want to extend in a serial
manner, overall
spiral
structure:
--A,--A,-AB
--B,--B,-BC
--C,--C,-Cx
.
.
--z,--z,-zA
that links the final A
to the initial A
Another structure piece is the
beginning sound of the
3rd word of the
1st and 2nd part of the
unit:
THINg
THINk
as well as
the duplication of the
pronoun
'I'
POETRY LINK: the next poem in my blog ...
using a modified tapering haiku
as a unit segment
Syllable Length:
8 - 6 - 3
Rhyme Structure:
--A,--A,-AB
which I want to extend in a serial
manner, overall
spiral
structure:
--A,--A,-AB
--B,--B,-BC
--C,--C,-Cx
.
.
--z,--z,-zA
that links the final A
to the initial A
Another structure piece is the
beginning sound of the
3rd word of the
1st and 2nd part of the
unit:
THINg
THINk
as well as
the duplication of the
pronoun
'I'
POETRY LINK: the next poem in my blog ...
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